James’ most recent creative writing

2008 March 28
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by hjdong

A blend of fact and fiction, transcribed by me,

“A Bad Day”

“Once upon a time, there was three people and one dog and two stuffed animals: Mama, Baba, James, and Arrow, and Jake and Fuzzball. Their refrigerator was old and car so they bought new refrigerator and car. One day there was an argument about R and W and when they got over it they started having cake. But W spit on it so they had cupcakes. James had two cupcakes and then they were strolling out of the door and one day there was a robber coming to steal all of their stuff. But then, the robber got tired and gave up trying to steal the stuff from James, Arrow, Darren, and Holly. And they lived hapily ever after. The End.” 

10 Responses leave one →
  1. 2008 March 29

    I am always a sucker for a happy ending.

  2. 2008 March 29

    I love it! Tell James to keep on writing and mom keep transcribing!;) Very good.

  3. 2008 March 29

    Well, it looks like you have a budding novelist on your hands. My favorite part is when W spit on the big cake and so they had cupcakes. . . I mean really . . . what else could they possibly do?

    Great stuff!

  4. 2008 March 29
    holly.dong permalink

    James is really enjoying hearing your comments. Thanks!

  5. 2008 March 29

    It seems like the robbers (spirits) thought everything was good, and then someone proclaimed it was actually sucky and the robbers left. It is a wonderful ending.

  6. 2008 March 30

    You had me going there for a moment. Love it!

  7. 2008 March 30
    Megan permalink

    Poor Penny! She doesn’t even get included in the story???

  8. 2008 March 31

    So glad there was a happy ending!

  9. 2008 April 1
    Amma permalink

    James, I loved reading you story. At first it was scary. My favorite part was the cupcakes. You were lucky and got 2!!

  10. 2008 April 3

    I have the pictures up now. I head hurts worse than the car looks. LOL!

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